Sunday, November 7, 2010

Untitled Piece of Crap

I see the sunset in your eyes
Tears of color when you cry
I feel the ocean on your skin
Waves of goosebumps from within

And I want to steal your attention
And I want to rob your affection

Only a few lines but yeah it kinda sucks. But leave your criticism anywhere you please. Just be gentle, it's my first time haha



  1. I really like it - I think it would make a fantastic song! Honestly, I think it's really really good, sweetie!

    Here's a guy you need to check out: Avalanche City ( He lives in New Zealand, put the whole album together himself, and it's amazing. It's also free, so go and download it. I love it, it's all I listen to right now. Very singer-songwriter.

    Anyway, I'm really proud of you! Let's see if we can't plink out some melodies when I come next month??